Here are my final designs for the book layout. I have looked over it for any mistakes. I'm hoping I didn't miss any. If you guys find any let me know. Also, if you find any other things I may have missed.
i particularly like the spreads with the very strong and rich colors. they stand out. 6-8 and 13 need that too! they are my least favorite simply because the color is not as good as in the other spreads. i think you text is great. i don't know if you need to sign you words on the first pages seeing as the divider has your name on it already... but that's totally up to you. i can't believe how much your spreads changed (into better of course!)
your spread look great. i don't love the type treatment on the yellow spread with the "ke" in neon. i think i would like to see the whimsical text more jagged, mimicking the lines drawn. that one was my least favorite. but like i said they look great
colton, i'm drawing a parallel between the decaying of human beings and signs. also, i'm introducing the life that exists around silverlake. it is a reflection of the decaying signs. that is why i have another picture on spread 10 (more people), where the passage of time is being depicted.
There needs to be an "and" in between undesirable and decaying. There is only two descriptions in the sentence so an "and" is a given.
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hey sal. loving it :)
ReplyDeletei particularly like the spreads with the very strong and rich colors. they stand out. 6-8 and 13 need that too! they are my least favorite simply because the color is not as good as in the other spreads.
i think you text is great. i don't know if you need to sign you words on the first pages seeing as the divider has your name on it already... but that's totally up to you. i can't believe how much your spreads changed (into better of course!)
your spread look great. i don't love the type treatment on the yellow spread with the "ke" in neon. i think i would like to see the whimsical text more jagged, mimicking the lines drawn. that one was my least favorite. but like i said they look great
ReplyDeletealso, i don't know if the spread of the lady is cohesive? great spread, but i'm not sure it fits?
ReplyDeletecolton,
ReplyDeletei'm drawing a parallel between the decaying of human beings and signs. also, i'm introducing the life that exists around silverlake. it is a reflection of the decaying signs. that is why i have another picture on spread 10 (more people), where the passage of time is being depicted.